PLEASE READ AND VOTE can you please vote in the comment box which one you like best out of these two paragraphs the first one is straight in to the action and the second one is about my forts and feelings."Crash” he passed the ball over to me and I was running for the try line some one gripped on to my leg so my only chance was to pass the ball over. When all my team mates went in to the ruck I ran over and dug my boats in to the ground and pushed.
“The pain was geting depper” were we going to win this game or were we going lose I did not like the feling of it. As we were training I saw there team and said “there team looks to easy toplay, but when we played them I thinked diffrent.
Hi kobe I will vote for the first one
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